Caught up on the earlier parts of the serial before reading this. This was an unexpected shift in perspective from last chapter. I could follow this chapter just fine, but for some of the earlier ones they were a little difficult to follow and keep track of who was speaking.
Thank you for the feedback :D During NaNoWriMo I worked a lot on later episodes, and felt the earlier parts lacking in a lot of the personalities that is going to be developed later on. Hence the question I had earlier on how should I approach editing older pieces. But I struggle a lot with conveying a personality through dialogues, as you said. Are there any tips you can recommend?
Sorry for the delay in responding. In my case I mainly just wanted more dialogue tags for clarity. I guess for a tip, think about word choice, how people phrase things, the kinds of words they use to convey something.
Caught up on the earlier parts of the serial before reading this. This was an unexpected shift in perspective from last chapter. I could follow this chapter just fine, but for some of the earlier ones they were a little difficult to follow and keep track of who was speaking.
Thank you for the feedback :D During NaNoWriMo I worked a lot on later episodes, and felt the earlier parts lacking in a lot of the personalities that is going to be developed later on. Hence the question I had earlier on how should I approach editing older pieces. But I struggle a lot with conveying a personality through dialogues, as you said. Are there any tips you can recommend?
Sorry for the delay in responding. In my case I mainly just wanted more dialogue tags for clarity. I guess for a tip, think about word choice, how people phrase things, the kinds of words they use to convey something.