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Proximus's avatar

You drew me in with the subtitle 😂

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Vu Phan's avatar

exactly what i was aiming for :D

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William F. Edwards's avatar

This was quite enjoyable, glad I found time to read it on a busy day. I thought the use of the word 'pal' felt a bit distractingly modern.

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Vu Phan's avatar

Thank you so much for your time. Im regards to God I have never thought of them of being bind by Time so their word use are more to depict a certain personality. I go into their personalities more in my serialized novel if you want to have a look :D

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